http://www.alisonkent.com/blog/2005/12/17/goes-down-easy-from-chapter-1/ Blah Blog Thu, 02 Feb 2012 02:06:07 +0000 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.9.2 hourly 1 http://www.alisonkent.com/blog/2005/12/17/goes-down-easy-from-chapter-1/comment-page-1/#comment-10940 kim Sun, 18 Dec 2005 05:01:30 +0000 http://www.alisonkent.com/blog/?p=1399#comment-10940 great job great job

]]> http://www.alisonkent.com/blog/2005/12/17/goes-down-easy-from-chapter-1/comment-page-1/#comment-10920 Alison Sat, 17 Dec 2005 20:46:08 +0000 http://www.alisonkent.com/blog/?p=1399#comment-10920 Oooh, I had to go back and reread to see what I'd done, LOL! What's funny is that this really isn't the finished product. I did one round of revisions following this, but then lost my copy when my hard drive crashed, sigh. Thanks so much! I'm glad y'all enjoyed it! Oooh, I had to go back and reread to see what I’d done, LOL! What’s funny is that this really isn’t the finished product. I did one round of revisions following this, but then lost my copy when my hard drive crashed, sigh. Thanks so much! I’m glad y’all enjoyed it!

]]> http://www.alisonkent.com/blog/2005/12/17/goes-down-easy-from-chapter-1/comment-page-1/#comment-10919 jaq Sat, 17 Dec 2005 20:31:21 +0000 http://www.alisonkent.com/blog/?p=1399#comment-10919 I love how you blended setting details (the newspaper, weather, food ingredients/tates, etc), characterization/body language/speech pattern and backstory so seamlessly. Now that's what I call layering. Your voice is very mainstream. I can definitely see where you're heading careerwise. :-) I love how you blended setting details (the newspaper, weather, food ingredients/tates, etc), characterization/body language/speech pattern and backstory so seamlessly. Now that’s what I call layering. Your voice is very mainstream. I can definitely see where you’re heading careerwise. :-)

]]> http://www.alisonkent.com/blog/2005/12/17/goes-down-easy-from-chapter-1/comment-page-1/#comment-10913 Laurie Sat, 17 Dec 2005 14:44:31 +0000 http://www.alisonkent.com/blog/?p=1399#comment-10913 Great stuff there! Thanks for sharing! Great stuff there! Thanks for sharing!

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